Entwined: 2.8

Entwined
Author: Heather Dixon
Rating: 2.8
Genre: Twisted Fairytale
THROWBACK REVIEW

“It should have frightened her, thinking of the palace as once evil and magicked, with the candelabras and ceiling murals alive, but it didn’t. It was hard to be frightened of a building that smelled of old toast.” 
― Heather Dixon, Entwined

NOTE: In order to keep up with my ever growing TBR pile, once a month I will now post a review of older releases.

I wanted to like this book. I say that a lot, but in a perfect world I would love every book I read. Entwined was recommended to me by a friend, so the bar was set higher than normal.

Synopsis:

Azalea is the crown princess of Eathesbury, and the eldest of twelve daughters. When they lose their mother, the girls are forced to go into mourning under the strict guidance of their distant father. In an effort to continue dancing, the one activity that brightens their days, the girls start attending a secret ball hosted by a mysterious man known only as the Keeper.

I don’t know if you all remember my fangirl rant about To Kill a Kingdom (GO READ THAT BOOK!) but this story did the exact opposite. It took a beloved fairytale, and mutilated it. Excuse me while I go weep in a forest dusted with diamonds.

À la Twelve Dancing Princesses style, the girls dance sneak out every night and the King posts a proclamation seeking the answer to their whereabouts. Dixon uses Entwined to fill in some of the more elaborate plot holes from the original story, such as how they find the magical forest and its back story.

She also includes her own special twist on the narrative, which is pretty much where I wanted to stop reading. It was boring. My entire reading list took a hit while I was struggling through this one.

Let’s start with the positive:

There was a playful wit to the prose that had me laughing out loud at times. Heather Dixon also does romance well, at least the few scenes that there were. It was embarrassing and flirtatious, a perfect portrayal of a newfound love interest.

Dixon also did a wonderful job at distinguishing each of the twelve differences, although that also had it’s downfalls in its execution. The dance motif that constantly appears throughout the story is masterfully executed and remains consistent.

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On to the negatives:

The relationships felt shallow. For example, Dixon utilizes the King’s title as a plot device to demonstrate their relationship arc. This failed attempt creates a shallowly written character who doesn’t recover as much as his relationship with his daughters does.

Furthermore, the characters were annoying. Each of the twelve princesses has an extreme characteristic to express their personality, and none of them are done in moderation. Azalea is steadfast (read: stubborn), Bramble is rambunctious, Clover is sweet, and so on. Their names are also in alphabetical order by birth, and all flowers. While this may be a useful tactic to help the reader remember each princess, it results in one dimensional, static characters.

The magic system looked like it showed some promise. I loved the idea of silver gaining power from the people who possessed it, and the thought of dancing having inherent power. The entwine, a dance in which one partner attempts to catch their partner with a sash, seemed like a wonderful way to incorporate these ideas. So I waited.

And waited.

The other shoe never dropped, ladies and gentlemen. There is a big twist, but it feels like some of the magical elements were forgotten halfway through the story. I almost want to reveal the ending so you know not to waste your time, but I won’t do that.

Seriously though, WHO STOPS TO DANCE IN THE MIDDLE OF A BATTLE?

Overall, Entwined didn’t live up to it’s hype. There were parts that were promising, but the execution was poor. The few enjoyable moments weren’t worth the time I lost by reading this book.

December Wrap Up

Happy New Year, friends!

I know I’ve been gone for most of this month, and I’m so sorry I haven’t updated anyone! I’ve had a bit of family trouble that took priority, I hope you all understand.

That being said, I have some very exciting updates!

  1. In an effort to showcase some of the amazing indie talent, the lovely Scarlett Austen has agreed to guest post on the blog through 2019! She’ll host Scarlett’s Indie Spotlight, which will feature author interviews, giveaways, and more!
  2. Lissa’s Library is creating a podcast! We’re currently open to submissions for author interviews and short stories. The podcast was initially scheduled to air in January, however we have experienced some minor delays with the production company. The new release date will be in February, with more updates to come!
  3. I’m back to my regular posting schedule as of next week, so please feel free to request the articles that you’d like to read!

Thank you all so much for bearing with me during this difficult time. I appreciate each and every one of you for reading this! This blog is going to experience a lot of changes in 2019, and I hope you enjoy them!

The Art of Story Telling: Audiobooks (Part 2)

Here are a few tips on how to decide on if its a good fit for you, and the first steps to take if you want to pursue it as a career.

I’ve also included links to the equipment referenced in this post. As an Amazon Associate, I earn from qualifying purchases, however, I highly recommend shopping around for sales, because the right equipment can get expensive.

  • Can your voice handle it?
    • So you love acting, you love reading, it seems like a dream job, right? Try reading a book aloud for a few hours and see how your throat feels. While doing this, try to maintain the same energy and volume for the entirety of your “performance.” While recording an audiobook, you’ll most likely be reading straight through for a few hours at a time. Don’t worry if you mess up a word or a line, you can use the punch and roll recording technique to go back and fix it.
    • Tips: HYDRATE. Don’t consume anything to dehydrate you or congest you. When I know I have to record that week, I avoid certain things like dairy, coffee, excessive sugar, etc. Also, when I go to the studio, I always keep the following items with me: chapstick, cough drops, throat spray, water, tea, and a granny smith apple.
  • Finding your niche
    • Ex. I sound like a teenager. I narrate YA and NA books. If I were to narrate a steamy romance novel, it would be weird. Like really weird.
    • Listen to other audiobook narrators and try to identify where your natural pacing and tone fit in best. It will make it easier for your voice to do work that comes to you naturally instead of forcing it for hours on end. Going off of the example above, I could voice that steamy romance novel, but it would be hard on my throat to maintain that lower pitch for the entirety of the book.
    • Finding a niche will also help you book more gigs and increase the sales of your audiobooks. (Ex. Since I narrate YA, my listeners can search for my other books. I wouldn’t want a steamy romance novel to pop up when my primary audience expects YA.)
  • Creating a demo
    • You need a demo. Even if you decide to strike out on your own, you can use samples from your demo to show prospective clients. It’s important, because it showcases your talent.
    • I highly recommend having a demo done at a professional studio, especially if you have no prior experience. If you choose to do it on your own, please make sure you have quality equipment and DO YOUR RESEARCH. I’ll talk about the technical aspects of a home studio and a production on Saturday, but different mics are better for different people depending on a variety of factors.
    • If you do decide to enlist the help of a studio, PLEASE thoroughly research the studios in your area before choosing one. There are several places that claim to be professional studios by people who don’t quite know what they are doing. I can’t even begin to count how many wannabe rappers from my high school spent thousands on their home studio and called themselves pros. No training. No research. No audio engineers. Just a few grand and a rap dream.
  • Listen to Audiobooks
    • You know how writers are supposed to read? And actors are supposed to watch? You have to listen to audiobooks. It helps you hone your craft. Listen to successful audiobooks in your niche. You’ll notice emotional range, voice variations, pacing, etc. that will help you when you narrate your first book.
  • Home Studio (optional)
    • Home studios are amazingly convenient, even if you work for an audio company. I live out of state from my company now, so I’m only in the same town as my studio about half of the year. That being said, they can get pretty pricey. There are a few key pieces of equipment that you absolutely need:
      1. Microphone: I use a Neuman TLM 102 ($699) ( in my home studio, but if you want a good starter kit, I recommend the Rode NT1-A ($229). The kit on Amazon comes with a shock mount, pop filter, and XLR cable. If you’re looking for a kit with everything included (except the XLR interface), Rode also has a Complete Vocal Recording kit ($329) that includes the above in addition to a mic stand and vocal reflector.
      2. Pre-Amp: I use a Focusrite 2i2 2nd Generation ($159) which is technically an Audio Interface, they also have a solo version if you shop around a bit. Because of the USB connection, I can use my laptop or my desktop depending on where I’m at. I’m upgrading to the Grace Design M101 ($765) in February.
      3. HEADPHONES. Do not use your AirPods or Beats by Dre and expect to be able to edit effectively. Beats are great for music, but once again, voiceover is a whole other beast. The problem with using normal headphones such as AirPods or Skullcandy to edit is that they are extremely forgiving. This means that you won’t catch all of the breaths and mouth sounds that you need to edit out. I, personally, love my Sennheiser HD 380 Pro ($199) headphones, because I can hear every crisp, cringeworthy mistake that I make.

I know that it seems extremely expensive to start out, but there are places to cut corners, and others where it’s simply not worth it. Headphones, for example, are extremely important, especially if you’re doing your own editing. I’ll talk more about the technicalities and benefits of each piece of equipment on Saturday, and go into detail about the process of producing an audiobook.

The Art of Storytelling: Audiobook Narration Myths (Part 1)

“Sometimes you have to go places with characters and emotions within yourself that you don’t want to do, but you have a duty to the story, and as a storyteller to do it.”

– Hugh Jackman

I’ve had a lot of questions about how to get into audiobook narration, and honestly, it’s a longer answer than most people realize. I’ll address some of the basic rumors that I’ve heard here, and next week I’ll talk a little bit about the preparation and technical side of audiobook production.

Thank you all for the requests. I’ve really enjoyed talking with each of you.

Now first of all, it’s important to note that not everyone is meant to be an audiobook narrator- and that’s okay. With that being said, let’s address some rumors.

Myths:

You need to know someone in the industry : FALSE
While it’s certainly helpful to know someone in the business, it is absolutely not necessary. All that’s needed to have a successful career narrating audiobooks is skill and hard work. There are a ton of resources to help new narrators navigate the industry.

Having a quiet place to record is essential: TRUE
Yes. I know that this seems like an obvious one, but whether you decide to record at a studio or from your home, you would be surprised how much the microphone picks up. And reverb. I’ll address reverb thoroughly in my post next week.
If you decide to record at a professional studio, make sure to thoroughly vet them first. I once heard a horror story from a narrator whose producer left car noises from the passing street in her final product. Those sounds should never have made it into the raw audio in a professional studio, let alone after post-production.

You have to have a background in acting: FALSE
Once again, while it’s certainly helpful depending on your genre, it is absolutely not necessary. Actually, in some cases, it might even hinder your career.
Why?
Because the microphone catches everything. Every breath, every quiver of your voice, and every inconsistent tick in that foreign accent you thought you had perfected. Audiobook narration is not a “fake it ’til you make it” industry. There are acting coaches who specialize in voice acting, because it’s an entirely different kind of beast. Even without coaching though, you can constantly work to hone your skills. Above all, audiobook narration is professional story telling, and if you can spin a good story, you’re on the right path.

You can use a USB microphone: FALSE
You. Guys.
I’ve been asked to review some of the demos that come across my producer’s desk, and there is a distinct difference when a USB microphone is in use.
(On a completely unrelated note, A NEW PRODUCER JUST JOINED OUR TEAM! I’m so excited. For those of you who don’t know, I’ve been wearing two hats for a hot minute while they scouted for new talent. Your girl is tired. And ready for a promotion.)
Here’s the thing about USB microphones: yes, they technically work. Yes, you might be able to score a few gigs with them. However, the odds are that these books will be a royalty share deal, which means you get paid royalties for every copy of the audiobook sold. Clients, or Rights Holders, have higher standards for PFH (per finished hour) products, since they’re risking their own money.
A royalty share deal means you only get paid if people buy the audiobook. Guess what’s a huge factor in people buying the book? Quality. Invest in a decent microphone and XLR interface, because trust me, it’s worth it. I’ll talk more about this in my next post. Even if you think you’ll start with the USB mic and upgrade later, do you really want those lower quality audiobooks floating around with your name on it? Do it for the brand your building.

You have to love reading: TRUE
I feel like this one should also be obvious, but you really have to love reading or this will be the most miserable career move you’ve ever made. You’re locked in a studio talking to yourself for hours on end. Sometimes in different voices. If you don’t love reading, and the project you’re working on, it can become amazingly tedious. We’ve all been there though, I mean, it’s a job. You don’t always love your work. When you have a project that you’re less than enthusiastic about, it’s important to push through and not let it show. Remember how I said that the microphone picks up everything? That includes boredom, smiles, shrugs, everything.

A great voice is all that you need: FALSE
Ooh, you guys. Do you know how many people think that because they have a great voice they can just sail into this career? A lot. Audiobook narration is about acting with subtlety, distinguishing your characters, channeling the emotion, tone and pacing of the book. A great voice is nice, but it is far from the most important part of storytelling. A wonderful example would be radio personalities. Their larger than life voices are great, but their training is a world away from the skills of an audiobook narrator.

You need to read the book before recording: TRUE
I don’t know how someone got it into their head that they could just jump right in, but that makes so much more work for everyone involved. A lot of planning goes into creating an audiobook, and it’s essential to know the story that you’re working with.
I always read a book twice before starting production, and I have a handy dandy notebook that I use to take notes on all of my projects as I go. I read it first to get a hold of the story, and write down a list of characters as I go, then the second time I mark down specific characteristics of each one that will affect the voice that I create for them.

This series is a bit longer than I expected, so next Tuesday’s book review will be replaced with Part Two of this series, and I’ll release the final part on Saturday. Check back on Tuesday for tips and tricks on how to decide if its right for you and how to prepare!

Thanks again for reading!

The Crown’s Game: 2.2

The Crown’s Game
Author: Evelyn Skye
Narrators: Steve West
Rating: 2.2
Genre: YA Dark Fantasy

“His laugh echoed through the entire room. He didn’t sound cruel, but then again, the worst kinds of cruelty come in the guise of kindness.” 
― Evelyn Skye, The Crown’s Game

****SPOILERS AHEAD****

In a world full of magic and danger, why wouldn’t a country’s future leader want a strong enchanter by his side?

Apparently, because he’s a hormone riddled teenager with no mind of his own.

I mean… I had the highest hopes for this series. Look at that cover! It’s stunning. I love the reversal of the city in the crown to display both sides. The cover is about as deep as this book gets. The aesthetic part of me is thrilled. The rest? Not so much.

Essentially, Vika and Nikolai have been raised with the knowledge that one day they will duel to the death for the right to become the tsar’s Imperial Enchanter. Country Mouse and City Mouse, as they shall henceforth be known, are excited for the opportunity to show off their skills and earn the coveted role. Thus, the Crown’s Game is set into motion, and Country Mouse is summoned to City Mouse’s domain to compete for the opportunity of a lifetime.

Want to know the most interesting part?

You just read it.

know. How could a magical duel to the death not be interesting? How do the words talent show sound to you? Not as exciting as a duel, I’m sure.

The mice were essentially tasked with showing off their magical ability, but all they did was try to one up each other, and it felt amazingly immature, even for YA. I mean, come on. The loser is supposed to die, and they were all “ooh, look at my life size music box.”

Also, let’s talk romance for a second. What. In. The. Ever. Loving. Name. Of. Love. Triangles. Was. That.

So City Mouse and Country Mouse embrace the enemies to lovers trope with arms wide open. Except they were never really enemies? They were mistrustful of each other, because sure, who wouldn’t mistrust someone who’s life depends on your death? They fall in love through their magic, without talking that much. It’s weird.

Pasha, the tsar’s son, is the one tasked with choosing the winner. This part makes sense, because the victor will be his enchanter when he ascends the throne. Pasha also happens to be Nikolai’s best friend, since childhood.

Does that give City Mouse an edge? NO. Apparently, Pasha is a hormone ridden adolescent who believes in love at first sight and can’t bear to sentence Country Mouse to her death.

I’m sorry little tsarovich, but if I was Nikolai, and you chose some girl that you just met over your best friend, I don’t care who your father is. It would be on.

I suppose I should explain the few pros that persuaded me to give this book the 2.2 stars that it earned.

The world building was detailed and beautiful, and the writing was smooth and delightful to read. The story itself lacked depth, and the characters were utterly ridiculous. Unfortunately, I have the e-book edition, so I can’t donate it.

Do you disagree? Comment below!